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Friday 8 May 2015

My best mum!

Image result for heartMy mum loves me. She kisses me when she goes away. At night she snuggles up next to me and reads me a book. When I am sad my mum will cheer me up by reading a story. On the weekends she plays with me on the trampoline. My mum is kind. She let me go to my neighbours house to play. She brings some biscuits from her work and gave them to me. My mum's name is Sunny and I really like her name. My mum is beautiful. She light's me up when she smiles. I love my mum and she loves me. 

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I know this when I write a recount about my best mum.


1 comment:

  1. Hello Elisha,
    You are my sweet precious baby always.
    Mom loves you very much always.
    Yeah, I like what you wrote. I do believe you will be a big writer!

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